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Cue back! 2
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Week 2 of my future incredible career, and not much has been going on. I have been training extremely hard, just to try and get my attributes up a bit, but i feel i am too fast for this. i can get from one side of the pitch to the other, and most of my team mates are still half way there. I guess pre season works like this, there are players, like me, commited to the sport and that take every single opportunity to become better, and there are others that i can't even call them football players, that do not work the minimum they should to try to improve. I honestly hope i do not get to share a locker room with those lazy guys, as i intend to only play with the best of the best, the créme de la créme, so i can be the best full, slash wing, back of the world for a long time.
Other than that, been trying to decide what number i would like to use, but i guess number 2 is right there. Also, i have been training my money hand motion, i will definitely be using that a looooot, so i want to do it right.
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#2
Hello fellow Outlaw! Sounds like you just read the game so much faster than anyone else, like Usain Bolt.

That said, the article seemed to end as soon as it started! I thought the start was strong, but the words seemed to run out to the end and Cue's musings ended up switching suddenly to the kit number. If I could give a 2.5 I would, but as I cannot I will have to use my brain and decide which number to do. 

3/5 (the structure is consistent and the narrative flows well enough; if you are looking for a 4+, I would suggest incorporating a deeper insight into speed or statistics for the player)
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