(S4) Robert Draper - Update Thread

[Leoben]

Update Scale:
5-7 - costs 2 TPE to go up 1 point
8-10 - costs 4 TPE to go up 1 point
11-13 - costs 6 TPE to go up 1 point
14-16 - costs 12 TPE to go up 1 point
17-18 - costs 18 TPE to go up 1 point
19-20 - costs 25 TPE to go up 1 point

TPE Earned: 78
+06 - Activity Check #26
+06 - Article
+10 Rookie Checklist
Create a Player
Point Task - Article
Activiy Check
Submit Update (This)
Player Store Purchase
+6 - Activity Check #27
+6 - Weekly Article
+4 - S4 Mock Draft
+40 - S4 Training Camp

Total TPE: 350+78 = 428

Adjusted Attributes
Bravery +16 (9->12)
First Touch +14 (6->10)
Dribbling +16 (9->12)
Acceleration +20 (8->12)
Pace +12 (10->12)

Bank: 0

[Leoben]

Created in error

[Henrik]

APPROVED

Earned TPE: 350 + 78 = 428
Used TPE: 428
Banked TPE: 0

[Leoben]

+6 TPE - AC #28
+6 TPE - Weekly Article

Earned: 12 TPE

Total TPE - 428 + 12 = 440

Adjusted Attributes
Balance: +8 (8->10)
Jumping Reach: +4 (8->9)
Bank: 0

[Renomitsu]

Update approved!

Total TPE: 440
Used TPE: 440
Banked: 0

[Leoben]

+3 TPE - Season 4 Week 1 Predictions
+6 TPE - Weekly Article
+6 TPE - AC#29

Earned: 15

Total TPE - 440 + 15 = 455

Adjusted Attributes
Jumping Reach +4 (9->10)
Balance +6 (10->11)
Bank +5 (0->5)

[Renomitsu]

Approved!

Total TPE: 455
Used TPE: 450
Banked: 5

[Leoben]

+6 TPE - AC #30
+6 TPE - Weekly Article (the forum counter had this as 306 words but grader said it was just below 300, so I got docked for the theme week claim, if it's the same thing here just take the extra point from my bank and I'll just claim 5 for th article too? hopefully that makes sense)
+3 TPE - Week 2 Predictions
+1 TPE - Week 3 Predictions
+5 TPE - Theme Week
+5 TPE - Week 4 Predictions
+6 TPE - AC #31
+6 TPE - Weekly Article

Earned: 38

Total TPE - 455 + 38 = 493

Adjusted Attributes

Jumping Reach +12 (10->12)
Balance +6 (11->12)
Concentration +8 (8->10)
Composure +8 (8->10)
Vision +8 (8->10)
Bank -4 (5->1)

[Renomitsu]

Unfortunately for the rubric's sake, I can't accept the weekly article in its current state (it's 291 words, not 306 because of the double spaces before the first word of some sentences). For now I have to reject the +6 for the article itself, the +5 theme bonus will be kept, and you can edit the article to be >300 words. I'll dock the +6 to balance in the meantime while you get that fixed and you can still claim it next week in addition to another article/affiliate TPE that you would normally claim.

Attributes updated:
Jumping Reach +12 (10->12)
Concentration +8 (8->10)
Composure +8 (8->10)
Vision +8 (8->10)

Total TPE: 487
Used TPE: 486
Banked: 1