Bayley [Week of 7/7]

[Bayley]

Graphic 1


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Graphic 3


Graphic 4


Graphic 5

[slothfacekilla]

Love these especially the tentacle around the text and the Roque sig!

[KnowledgeBoy]

Graphic 1: 4/5
Graphic 2: 3/5
Graphic 3: 2/5
Graphic 4: 3/5
Graphic 5: 3/5

1: The tentacle wrapping around the text is a very nice touch and the overall color direction and spacing in this picture is pretty professional (not to mention that nice inclusion of REYK's logo on the jersey). I feel that the only thing that can really elevate this piece is if the background was less active (currently, there is too much happening behind the player and it can be distracting to the viewer).

2: I like the borders that were used on the left and right side of the graphic and the flat logo style of the template is very appealing. However, I don't think the player portrait was cut properly near the S.I.K. logo and the player image itself is a little pixelated (sometimes, its just the way it is). I also think that the player name can be displayed in a much more professional and integrated way because as it stands right now, it does stick out. Good job integrating the logo to the jersey!

3: While the style is very unique and the player number in the background has a nice striking display with its current design, I do notice that the composition is a little sloppy. There is an unnecessary black bar on the top and the player name font and color completely overshadows the main player picture. On top of that, the player picture does look tacked on to the center with other better place to put it in the current composition. I believe that this graphic can certainly benefit with a rearrangement and proper framing of the elements currently on display.

4: I like how most of the elements are framed in this picture. The Shanghai Dragon's borders add the team flair along with the team logo nicely embedded into the jersey of the player! There is a lot going on visually in this piece, but I never feel overwhelmed by these elements. 2 things I would change with this is how the player image is positioned and framed (looked tacked on last minute) and the player name font can be moved and changed to a better font. Good Work!

5: I love how everything looks, with the messy theme giving off the rat energy we love from Roquefort, and the visual gif positioned in the cheese is positively glorious. As far is missteps go, I think showing the full name (none cutout from the cheese wheel) would do nicely, and as it stands, the USP logo is hard to look at with it being buried by the template and Roquefort himself. If these concerns are handled with proper care, I think this kind of graphic would be elevated to new design heights.