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Gotta Catch 'Em All - The Gianlugia Story Pt. 1
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It was a warm Sydney afternoon as fans filled the stands, buzzing with excitement for the teams' first game of the season against the Victoria Falls Eagles. The team had multiple new players making their academy debuts tonight, including Sydney's new blue chip goalkeeper, Gianlugia Bufoon.

No, not Gianluigi Buffon, this is a different Italian goal keeper. Easiest way to tell them apart is that Gianlugia is bald.

Fresh off the boat (just kidding, it was a plane, but let's pretend this is a simpler time) from Italy, Gianlugia was excited to make his debut in Sydney and take his first step towards his ultimate goal: getting drafted to an SSL team. It had been a whirlwind year for Gianlugia, who had seen the highest of highs in Serie C this past season, while spending a lot more time than he would like to admit questioning his own abilities. He had seen fellow Serie C player and close friend, Joao Cancelo, make the move to Australia mere weeks ago, and Joao had told him how great he had been treated by the organization so far. Gianlugia was still very much on the fence, however, until he received a call from Sydney manager Sparky "The Spark" Dee. Sparky laid out his vision for the upcoming season, and little by little, Gianlugia began envisioning it himself. By the end of the call, it was clear what decision had to be made.

Gianlugia was going to Australia.
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Nice little piece here, kept short and sweet and gets the job done

The narrative runs smoothly, and reads well. Throw in some more details to push this into the higher grades.

Media grade 3/5
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